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| Wolfgirl1987 2005-06-07 ch 1,   | I like this one alot... I love the short choppiness of the sentences... and the anger and hostilty that seems to be hidden behind each stanza. Vivid emotions seem to pour of from this poem. My favourite stanza is the last... "If you want unquestioned loyaltyLook for it in a dogFor I will not be one for youI am no one’s pet" It's sad that so many girls often feel this way...that they have to be a dog to so many guys... that they have to allow them to be their master... This poem is one that can inspire many. Keep up the good work.Much love and God Bless,Wolfie |