This is lovely.

Aw. Sweet.

cute and yes you do have sex on the mind. You're as bad as me when it come to writing stories. But it's not all about the sex

This reminded me of my best friend so much!I loved it! ^_^

O_O wow...

almost reminds me of my and my fuck buddy's first time...*she's a girl*

it was alittle different though ^_^

That was just so...sexy! i mean, sensual but sexy. I can relate to the story, though I'm the one ashamed. LoL

Hey, great poem. I like it. Thanks for reviewing my work.

I loved it!

For this is the girl I want to fuck.

But tonight for the first time we make love, oh imagine my luck.

I like this.. it was sad, but sweet ending. I read some of your other poems too; very nice, depressing though.. Thanks for reviewing my stuff btw! Later! - Christina

think about gay people much? i liked it. but... it was a little gay. hehe. thanks for putting my story on your thingamabob. suffer the children indeed. oh yes, one more thing. Are you dead? Haven't seen you on in a while, so i figured you're dead or least in a coma. well when you learn to type again say hello.

I like, i like.

This is really good. A lot of emotion and expressions. keep it ^.

JB Madden

so your a girl...right? and a lesbian? sweet.beautiful poem, really got into it...too bad my first wasn't like that...ah, well...that's life

hot and sweet