*sings* Wow! Loads of chapter! Wow! Wow WO-O_OW!! Dan'el eh? I like 'im... *blinks* actually... *snatches him and drags him off into the night leaving only a pair of socks in his place* Mwaahahahahah! HAHAHA! I love this story! Its so cool! XD

Yay! I'm so glad you finally posted this.

OMG. The foxes were unforeseen . . .

and how dare you lay off at a cliffie like this?

Love and sporks,

Chiomi

Yay! You posted it! *shifty eyes* I never threatened to kill you*

I love it!

Ah, yes, the ever-present red sparks. Foxes? And yes, Dan'el...lurved the snugglies. The snugglies made me happy.

Keep up the quick updating!!

I like Dan'el! Much! Partly because I know where he's going to go...so Careful What You Wish For has no closure? Darn...

WOW! *clings to socks desperately as people in street look up to window and walk faster* IT ROCKED MY...ROCKED...my...IT ROCKED!ROCKED THE WORLD I SAY!UPDATE SOON!and, i love this girl, shes so funny lol

No ruling the world! And I love it so far.

A! Cliffie! Love the "shower of red sparks" thing, I'm usually just like "everything went black. The end." Anywho...at least you can come up with a plausible backstory. I like the backstory, actually. And I love all the names you give everything. Glad that Malekai is a good guy and no sexual offender. Can't wait for Chapter 5! (How is this one only going to be nine chapters?)

It's the girl without internet! I love this chapter, the entire story vaguely reminds me of Tamora Pierce's Song of the Lioness quartet...*kills Malekai* Ah, I always wanted to do that. (side note: Pierce Academy from YKWTS and Drumming of the Heart is named after Tamora Pierce...anyway...) Great job, and now I have to go and read the next chapter. btw, Delia is an awesome character!

*humming and just pulling on socks...when suddenly they fly off and out window..*wah...?!OH WOW!YAY! UPDATE!ONCE MORE YOU ROCKED MY SOCKS OFF!!

*Unlucky person gagging in street outside window*

and what aim! ! ! ! ;)

UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

Dude...this is SO awesome. I absolutely love it! What especially caught me was the summary. It had the word sex in it...feh. Who could resist? Lol! Anyway, I can't wait for your next chapter - I *love* this story!

It's all much clearer now- you did a good job of explaining how it worked without being redundant or sounding like a grocery list. One thing I didn't understand is why she had to run away. Just on Delia's say-so? Of course, the king and Malekai don't like her, so maybe that's reason enough. What happened to Ariana and Wisel being her companions/servants/handmaidens? (Well, not Wisel=handmaiden, but you know what I mean.) I want to know more about them?

Awesome! You named your character, I noticed ~_^ Unless you did so in Chapter One, in which case don't I feel stupid. Only two chapters? Update soon! Soon, I tell you! Soon!

*coughs* Anyway, I love the plot you kept going here. Too many people wait far too long to get into the action. I'm glad to see you didn't. I can't wait to find out what the Speaker is/does and why Corin and Wesil don't talk. And all about Tyler, and so much more! Update soon!

This is a really cool story. I love Stargate too, BTW. But you don't really want to hear that. Eh-nee-ways...you have a neat plot started here, I can't wait to hear more about Wisel and Ariana. And the main character, too, of course ^_^ I don't -think- you named your heroine...it took me a minute to figure out that she was a girl. (The breasts comment was when I realized.) If you remedy that in the next chapters (that I am about to read), that'd be good.