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| Ethereal October 2005-05-01 ch 1,   | Very nice...simple, sweet, and right to the point. |
| youzi 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Sucha sweet piece...makes me feel really winsome and all..haha..do keep writing =D |
| grey-blob 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Eek~ the calm before the storm. I interpreted as carefree innocence thats destroyed with experiencing strife and hardships. I liked it :) |
| Jessicka-scab 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Aww, how sweet! Very lovely, good job |
| swtdreamz101 2005-05-01 ch 1, | so calm and peaceful feeling, it makes me think of a breezy day while lying on the grass and letting the wind play w/ ur hair, nice poem |