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| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 8,  | abuseOkay... I am the slowest person in the universe... I just now realized that you wrote this story over 2 years ago and that it's not finished yet. For some reason I was thinking that you were in the middle of writing it, right now! Oops... Well... hmm... it was an interesting concept, what it had so far. |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 7, | abuseIt's always funny when Arianna talks to herself. Of course the cruise would be the perfect time to go shopping! Haha! |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 6, | abuseHmm.. I don't know if that Gary/Ari interaction was actually necessary for the story, but maybe I just didn't get it the way I should have. I am so terrible at following along when there are a lot of characters. And what's going on with this Standford guy anyway? Why does she hate him so much? |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 5, | abuseIt looks like this plot is about to get even more complicated. With these new characters entering the picture, I am wondering how this is going to connect with what is going on with the wedding deal... curious... |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 4, | abuseOkay, I have to admit that the flashback scenes were a little bit confusing. It was like, a flashback within a flashback, which threw me off a little bit. But the scene with the brownies was really funny and cute! Nice work with that! |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 3, | abuseCan't wait to find out more about Smirk Boy! And I do believe that Arianna just keeps sounding more and more spoiled and selfish. I am really liking this different POV. |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseA little bit of mystery drama thrown in there.. with the other person who died that night and the two surrogate brothers. Very intriguing. So this elitist society is very interesting to me... mostly because I am not familiar with this at all, so it's cool to see a different way of life. |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, this seems to be an interesting start to a story. I like how the main character is a bit, well... not the type of character we usually sympathize with. Spoiled and a bit conceited, to say the least. But it should make for an interesting point of view. Well done! |
| ANGEL992210 2007-11-29 ch 2, | abuseI love this story. |
| ANGEL992210 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story. |
| longypk 2007-11-02 ch 8, | abuseI wish you would update! it's great story! |
| Swimmingly Yours 2007-06-28 ch 8, | abusehelo! i hope this shows you how actually bored i am. i didn't read this by the way, just wanted to drop you a line on something other than facebook. LOVE YA! |
| Swimmingly Yours 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseLol, after I read this first chapter I recognised some distinct features of Alex... I can kinda see why you like her, no offence. Interesting story, I will read the rest when it's no longer midnight. So you probably know me, eh? yeah, that is stalkerish. Were you in HKMUN last year or seomthing? (mwhahaha... I'm MUN leader for LPC next year, so you'd be at my disposal...) |
| The Paperback Mummy 2006-05-17 ch 8, | abuseAh, I love this story!! It's SO hilarious, I can't drink while reading it, I'll spit it out. haha. It's also cute how the characters show up in your author's notes. :P I can't wait for more! It's a nice break to read this when the story I'm writing can be rather serious. KEEP IT UP! you are a very talented comedian and writer ;) |
| jiji j 2006-01-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseWHERE IS THE UPDATE? :'( |