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| Traced In Green 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Wow. Very nicely written and very powerful. Great job. |
| randomunknown 2005-05-01 ch 1, | This is absolutely packed with emotion. Firstly I felt pity, then I agreed with the speaker that it's his own fault, but then the speaker became a bit too harsh and I was left sympathising with the man! Im very confused so Ive added this to my faves and hope it makes sense later! Fantastic job. Please keep writing! |