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| Wilwarindel 2006-02-28 ch 1, | Wonderful use of structure and pace and the repetition is just what the poem needs to hammer home your point. Fabby! |
| Pyroballerina16 2005-06-30 ch 1, | One word. Beautiful. |
| teen-angel14 2005-05-02 ch 1, | This is so great. And it's so true.. You write a lot of good poems. Keep it up. E-mail me some time. |
| Angelic Cynicism 2005-05-02 ch 1, | You're writing is always so uplifting. You have such a positive outlook on life. I love that, I wish I could think so positively all the time.. But I have that "I could think it will but it won't in reality" kind of personality. But I have plenty of dreams still so its ok. You're writing is definitely good to read when I'm down though ;) Keep up the good work, hun! |