good story, but (sorry to be critical) the principal was a bit of a stereotype.

I thought this was cute, but it was very, very Matilda-ish. Which I don't mind, I like Roald Dahl, but...you might want to make it a little more original. Good work, though. Keep at it.

it was pretty funny, but i don't fully understand

The beginning was very cute with his 'speech problems' however I must admit i didn't get the rest of the story. -NB

That was cute. I noticed some elements of the story had been partially taken and edited from other pieces of work (e.g. Larry Snotter= Harry Potter and the dog barking whenever someone said 'Fray Lufwaffa' was in the movie Young Frankenstein :P) It was alright overall, though.

the names, are they suposed to be a parody to Harry Potter? I found this pretty funny, your writingis really good but it wasn't overly funny. (For my sides to ache or anything of the sort.) But I did giggle, but that was really it. Not bad, pretty good actually.

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