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| Cloud Burst 2005-05-21 ch 1,  | abusenice details and lovely haiku! great work! |
| Yuki Sasaki 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... Wonderful imagery. Keep up the good work. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseusing "my black hair" instead of just "my hair" is a very nice touch of detail, it makes the poem much better. |
| Toph Gonzalez 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseElegant imagery... it has all the elements of a haiku save for the 5-7-5 rule... |
| Galadh Niniel 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, the contrast between the colours is nice, and also the image of snow for flowers. Good job. |
| Miz E. Mak 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... outside of my dorm there was a tree that had awesome pink flowers in it, and when the wind blew they would flutter everywhere like beautiful, lifeless butterflys. Too bad they all fell off... it was so cool and this reminded me of it immediately. write on. |