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| water lorelei 2006-09-21 ch 9,   | Well... That was interesting. Interesting that you made Garth the bad guy... sorry. Just thought about that. I'm a bit confuzed, though. You'll have to explain. Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep 'em comin'! Rachel x |
| water lorelei 2006-07-03 ch 7, | Okay... this is the second killing, right? Coincidence? I think not. Yet Diana does. Wow. Wake up, people! Accidental? No no no. Wrong! I'm probably the most paranoid reveiewer you have. Hehe. Farewell, *silent darkness* Ps-If I could read French, I would review your poem. But I can't... sorry! |
| water lorelei 2006-06-29 ch 6, | So, is this baby-cryer the villian, or is it something else? Hm... Please update more often! You're killing me, here! They have stables at their school? AWESOME! So, what's with Rusty? Is she the next victim, or just another accuser? Hm... Farewell, and update soon, *silent darkenss* |
| water lorelei 2006-06-21 ch 5, | Alison... Sharing a room with a boy is a bit much... Alison didn't even say Tanya pushed her! Ugh. I hate principals. For this exact reason. Ugh. Farewell, *silent darkness* |
| water lorelei 2006-06-21 ch 4, | So... this is mainly about her fear? Fear coming true, maybe? Maybe not... |
| water lorelei 2006-06-21 ch 3, | So sorry I fell behind! Okay, I think I understand that Kim's mom would be upset, but to blame it on one of her friends? Weird. Farewell, *silent darkness* |
| water lorelei 2006-06-09 ch 2, | Hopefully they won't blame Diana. I'm pretty sure she didn't do it. Someone with a distorded face... Hmm... Please update soon! Please please please! Farewell, *silent darkness* |
| water lorelei 2006-06-09 ch 1, | Whoa. Sweetness. That was awsome... not the dying part, but the PLOT IS AWESOME!! Seriously. Sweet. Love it. So much. Gotta read more. Farewell, *silent darkness* |
| Sweet Lunacy 2005-09-11 ch 5, | This is the second time I have done this, and I realize it is weird to review one's own story, but I just wanted to thank my three wonderful reviewers! Thank you so much for takin the time to read my sad little excuse for a story. I want y'all to know that I appreciate it very much! Thank you!~Trisha |
| Sean R. Graham 2005-09-11 ch 1, | Hey, I really appreciate your contributions to horror fiction. It's great! I got a story I think you might like, called Californian Noose. I'll give you a tease: there's a girl with hooves in it. If like scary stories, I'm confident you'll LOVE what I do. Give my submissions a read sometime, if you like. |
| Mourner of the Colossi 2005-07-05 ch 1, | you asked me to review. so, here i am! ...creepy. i couldn't imagine that happening to me, or one of my friends. i don't think Alison killed her, i think the guy from the beginning of the chapter killed her. oh, um, i'm sorry i can't read the rest right now. i have to go do some chores. but i promise i'll read the rest! |
| fairy-catcher 2005-05-01 ch 1, | so who's the killer?that was really a cliff-hanger!(it rhymed!!) Anyway, who killed her? Is it Allison? I mean it does certainly like her, but then again she was back with Stephen, ..Update soon!! |