This is amazing. Your style is very distinct, and the ending was ver creepy.

Wow, that was an intresting piece. I really liked it. But was that kid really lucky? To be left scarred with such a horrible memory? Keep up the good worrk.

~Dream Forever

You have a great writing style. This story sounds very creepy and as you said - quite uncanny! I'm very intrigued! I wonder if there's more...