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Reviews For: Fantasy Worlds

Noihseret 2006-06-30 ch 1,	your words paint a beautiful picture. you have such a natural talent for making words flow together like this. great job ^^
Duckie 2005-07-16 ch 1,	'Ello, luff. I've barely been back for a day and yet I'm already spending too much time on the computer. You should know who this is.You gave this poem (and a nasty cold) to me at camp and I liked it there. I like it here as well. Being the color freak that I am, I loved your use of visual metaphors, although I think you might want to trim a few... oh, I don't know. You got your point across quickly, so this poem could probably be shorter.Nice job.Luff,Duckie.
Joey7691 2005-06-24 ch 1,	I think I figured out why I like your work so much. It's never the same twice. It's unique and original from anyone else's. The same applies here.
otterpaws 2005-05-27 ch 1,	This is beautiful! I like thee imagery and thee descriptions of things. It also has a nice peacefull pace to fit thee poem. Great work!-Merf.
Plato's Socialist Democracy 2005-05-26 ch 1,	Its kinda like a womb except some babies never get to leave the womb do they at least not alive positive comment um... it probably meant something somewhere negative comment it had no spelling errors and therefore lacked the fun that i feel from reading things with spelling errors that had authors that werent gradeschool teachers in training and actually had enough emotion to make a mistroke on the keyboard. ful of sound a fury signifying nothing dont you like my original thought.
starflames 2005-05-17 ch 1,	that was really cool. i like the feeling it gives you when you read it.~karen p.s. congratulations on that writing contest!
So'hoc 2005-05-01 ch 1,	I like the description and word choice in your poem, it really forms a picture in my mind. Although there are questions unanswered. Like why you chose four, and what their fantasy worlds are like.

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