I know you haven't been on fcp for what?...three years now? But I have you know this has been one of my favorite poems for at least the past year - I just never reviewed it. But i don't think it'll make much of a difference now, seeing as how you haven't visited this fine site in so long. Missing your amazingly creatively inciteful updates...

Wow. I'm very much impressed. I did get confused, somewhere in the middle, when there was dialogue of sorts between the woman and the sky, but I might've sorted it out in my head. In any case, it was well done and I enjoyed it...and I'm not really big on poetry.

BB- Arej

Please do not be offended, but I want this explained: So, they make love, simply because it is Beltaine? That seems odd.

Meh... the story was entertaining, but I didn't like the format or schematic. You wrote a prose but chopped it up and didn't really have any great poetic metaphors. But I did like the last part!

"For each other, a match made in Hell, toBurn brightly against the dark for all time."

I don't know why, but that's just really... neat.

I'm once again impressed.