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| Rubyme 2005-08-27 ch 1,   | Simple. Short. And utterly beautiful. =) YOu have some real talent. |
| Pomaikai 2005-05-02 ch 1, | Short and sweet! Are you really getting this published? Good Job! |
| xReport Card 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Aww, that's so sweet. It's like, powerful. Short but powerful. n__n |
| aeolyn 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Beautiful! It evokes strong emotion, especially the way you ended the poem. And the sort of rhythm you have is great too. Loved it. I can see why you're getting it published. |