love how you captured the rebellious (though often hypocritcal) teenage girl spirit. great ending.

-salt.

Wow. The part about Tinkerbell and pixie stix was a nice touch.

hm... doens't seem like a typical poem to me... sort of like a prose/poem um thingie. a horizontal poem but hey it's atypical, and atypical's good. the height itself seems to be success more than literal height, and brackets seem to be the girls interjections. seems like the whole poem is a friend gossipping about her while said speaker imagines/remembers the girl's comments (in brackets) except for the last line, which really made me imagine someone whispering it into someone elses ear.

she is waiting for the misery that has already come (?)

awesome poem- i've never attempted this format but it worked well in this particular poem.

Haven't read anything like this in a long time-thankyou.

...wow. where to begin? the title: perfection. and this is just pure genius. i love the way you write, and i love your use of parentheses, and i love the combination 'shatter vertigo'. yes, you have been added to favorites everything. i wish i could write like YOU.

awesome. really, i wanted to say thanks for the positive review, but i am very impressed. i hate annoying people who review constantly just to look smart by critiqing someone else's work with big words. i love that you're not someone like that. keep up the good work _

Oh I just found my new favorite poet. The third stanza...wow. I wish I was a better reviewer but I like to just sit here and appreciate it. Words are hard to come by. But I will try: you are amazingly talented and I want more!

wow, i liked the profound meaning in this Great job!

keep writing!

Beautiful!

I have to say this is brilliant, as all your other works. Beautiful, and amazing!

!* Noelle *!