short but makes sense to me, really nice structure here, i think you could actually make this longer but this is sweet as it is.

x weasel within x

about my poem - What it is to Touch - i actually meant there are 3 people in the poem, 2 people who are dancing / doing something else... and the speaker of the poem who wants the girl... that's basically the gist of it! have another look see, would be interesting to know if it's just me who can see 3 people! just let me know in another review :)

once more, deep and touching. sounds like you're trying to find something really want but can't quite grasp it.

Sorrow

wow. powerful as well!

This is great. Love the format. Great job, keep up the good work! QueenVixta