Did they break up, or did someone die? Maybe i'm being stupid. Anyways, good. I like the feeling, emotion.

Tear...

Absolutely love this one! It is so sad. Amazing job! I definately adding it to my favourites!

WAH! SAD! --but good!

aww... this is sweet. one of my friends is in a similar situation... all i can do is offer my deepest sympathies and my compliments on a great poem. you hit the nail right on th head! great job, and i hope your life gets better! ^_^

nice. deep, I like it.

Solo.

welcome to the lovely hand of breaking up. I know what you're going through-anyway, this is well written and contains genuine feeling. the only thing I picked out was the 14th and 15th lines both end in "though" I also feel like you could add a lot to this piece by way of spacing-just something to play around with. good job.