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| Qlmmb2086 2005-05-06 ch 1, | Good job, this is very good writing. Your characters developed perfectly. I like your story, mainly because I'm (slightly?) obsessed with dragons. |
| Steel Winged Dragon 2005-05-02 ch 1, | Thank you for the help. :) That's exactly the kind of nitpickiness I need. :) |
| ShianeCollins 2005-05-02 ch 1, | Hi! Well, I found this and it caught my interest so I had to read it. I really liked the way you set it up. Very well written as it is. And I only found two mistakes. Clearly typos, seeing as I've done those particular mistakes myself. -"...scantily glad body,..." isn't is supposed to be "clad"? and the other one you needed an ending quotation mark where it says-"...this nasty weather." That's all I found and I thought I should point them out. But otherwise I hope you update soon! |