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| Cobster 2005-05-01 ch 1,   | Kind of goes off on a tangent...edgy poetry, I guess. It's teetering on the line dividing imagery from ranting. I like the lines "I'm tired of a world where/ I've lost all my talent and write/ Out of sheer entropy..." interesting word choice. Anyway, I think what sucks most is that people choose not to do a damn thing about all this crap. Here I am more aware of what the hell's going on than most of the population is and I can't even vote yet. |
| starbursts and YourLove 2005-05-01 ch 1, | wow..that's some good stuff! And the imagery is beautiful. |