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| poet tree 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuse*laughs so hard she knocks the keyboard off the desk* I love it! The rhymes are forced, true, but that's what makes it amusing. |
| Katrina Gabrielle 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseoh cool! i realized you were talking about the curses on Egypt almost instantly, so good on that. I love how each particular 'curse' is depicted and thought out.I kind-of liked the rhyming fator, though it was a bit much at times. Still, good job |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it, even the forced rhyming. Some of it did sound natural, and the last line provoked a grin. |