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| Katrina Gabrielle 2005-05-03 ch 1, | cool... strange, but coolI love the illatic parts at the ends of each versethe whole poem is beautifulPS- thanks for the review on The Story |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-02 ch 1, | The formatting made me smile, and the metaphors to your mind were enchanting. Lovely use of imagery, really great last line. |