haha, I love the ending! XD But, I didn't just like the wittiness of the last couple of paragraphs, I also liked that she saw her father again. :)

I get a very clear image of these enigmatic twins, and this story really builds up the relationships between the characters. I like the idea of summoning gems, reminds me of Final Fantasy summoning materia, they are a fun and interesting detail to your story. Somebody already mentioned your grammar in a review of another story; I did agree with the other review. You have a habit of doing something that can be confusing:

"I was gonna ask if the twins are up yet?" Shion grinned and nodded, sipping his orange juice.”

This is a separate line to the rest of the text, and I believe that Alisha says this, but the way you structure it makes it seem Shion is saying this, it would be better something like this:

“So how are the tw-” Alisha began at the same moment Shion started to say: "How are you feel-" Alisha chuckled slightly, and that made Shion feel much better. Leaning over to kiss her cheek slightly he nodded. "Go On.""I was gonna ask if the twins are up yet?" Alisha finished.Shion grinned and nodded, sipping his orange juice.

Do you see what I mean? I assume you edit your work, so keep an eye on that grammar! :3 I’ve managed to read up to chapter eight, and again…I’ll show your ideas show potential, keep writing x

So far so good =) I must say though, my favourite char has to be Xander. He has the most sexcellent name! ^^;

The first 3 sentences all have 'her' in them, and it's a bit of overuse :S

I love every character in your story for some reason. They're just all very likable.:)

I like the interaction of the twins, for some reason. :)The only thing I didn't really like (because it's something I'm really picky about) was when you wrote,

Hadn't she felt the warning, the danger ahead of them?

"Kyree, didn't you feel the warning?"

I think you should use different wording for the second one (didn't you feel the warning?) to make it sound better.

Dragons. Rule.Sorry, had to say that. :)