Started out fairly decent, but quickly became rushed and disjointed.

The ending itself, and the weak explination for her boyfriends absence, left quite a bit to be desired.

A very dark story, but a very well written one for something hastily written. Talk about getting a-head, though. (Pardon the bad pun.)

the ending was excellent - pls update *shivers** im definitely gonna have nightmares tonight..

oh my.. geez that was scary! and to think my teddy bear still sits on my bed... that was one of your best horror stories! [not that you wrote all that much..] that was.. amazing. really... i liked the idea. oh and i also wrote a new story. it's humor. anywayz.. im off to read more...really nice!

wow was this a class progect or did you think it up? It is really good horrifying but good, man it gave me chills