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| Sharakinpaix 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseHaunting. Absolutely haunting. Your enjambment was dead on; I read it out loud, the first word of every line with emphasis. Absolutely haunting... "Seven hundred and seventy pounds.""With blood, try to save each other." Haunting. |
| i was a postcard 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuse"They thought at first wave that it was an earthquake / Or war, and who are any of us to say that it wasn't all / Of these things?" Gave me chills. You are such an amazing writer, I'm sad I haven't been reading your work. |