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Sharakinpaix
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseHaunting. Absolutely haunting. Your enjambment was dead on; I read it out loud, the first word of every line with emphasis. Absolutely haunting...

"Seven hundred and seventy pounds.""With blood, try to save each other."

Haunting.
i was a postcard
2005-05-02
ch 1,
abuse"They thought at first wave that it was an earthquake / Or war, and who are any of us to say that it wasn't all / Of these things?" Gave me chills. You are such an amazing writer, I'm sad I haven't been reading your work.
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