This was good, but a little more on the fanfiction side you know? Jamie = Jepha perhaps? Not that I mind, but you might get more hits on this story if you moved it to FanFiction dot com instead.

Anyway, I really liked this story. Well written indeed.

Poor Quinn. Jamie is a bastard. *Shoots Jamie in the head* Ahh. I feel better. Can I have Quinn if you're done torturing him? Great lemon by the way. [though it's not allowed on this site, you know right? not that I mind]Good fic.

It freaked me out when I couldn't find your pen name. Anyway, amazing job with these characters.

omigod...thats so unfair to quinn... this story really looks like it can be continued..is it a one-shot??i hope not...so sad...but a good fic though...

Aww, that was kinda sad...okies really sad. I don't even know how to leave a proper review...

Kick ** story man. I mean wow I loved it.

Guess the Beatles were wrong 'eh? Love isint everything.

Oh my god, that's so sad and sweet. I absolutely love it

That was incredible! All of the emotion you packed into that one chapter was almost overwhelming, but just perfect! It wasn't the same Quinn from "Cherry", was it?

Continue? This looks to me more like a one-chapter-and-no-more kind of story.

You reveal their names only towards the end of the story. This makes the reading slighty confusing. Anyway, you did a great job discribing the two characters. Good work!