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| Conker 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's a nice theme, too, and true. The "blackness of night" and "whiteness of snow" juxtaposition worked well. Keep writing |
| Tell me its not true 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great {as always} I think it will work great as your song. |