Reviews for The Storm of August

zootles 2006-03-13 ch 1,	You need some sovere help
A Painter of Poems 2005-05-09 ch 1,	how do you write about weather so well? sheesh, ur making me jealous. gr. oh well. maybe reviewing ur stuff will give me good luck, and inspire me to write a weather poem. good choice on where to split up the lines. im usually pretty unsure about it, and about how other people choose to do it, but this one was really good. please keep reviewing me. it's nice to know people actually READ what you write. good job on this one!
youzi 2005-05-08 ch 1,	The rhyme is natural and unobtrusively slotted in...loved how this one flowed..well -structured. keep writing =D