awesome poem. i love the imagery, so vivid and beautifully expresive. nicely done. i like your use of capitalization to provide emphasis on or personification of certain concepts. nice work. keep it up!

Brilliant end. I love this. Great job.

it matters not the length, but the quality of the piece. this was very well written. i really enjoyed the use of personification and imagery. keep writing =0)

God bless in your hiatus...You will certainly be missed... :( r.

Beautiful, beautiful. ^-^

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