I found this interesting and refreshing. I like it.

Yeah, I think it's called a tanka or something.

quite lovely, my dear.

refreshingly eloquent, enough said...

I liked that a lot. Really didn't seem much like a haiku though 'cause aren't haikus supposed to have three lines?

so short but yet perfect that way. I love how you wrote it. It was very well done! I love the first 2 lines. Great job on the poem. nice job. )