eloquent and lovely! beautiful work!

Completely jealous of both your haunting storytelling skills and of your powerful, bold rhyming schemes. Perfect fits to the words without any loss of impact. Lovely work.

I love it! Beautiful imagery and the like, as usual. I really don't know how you do it, Mia. And I love your little AN, because as I was reading it, I was thinking about how that rhyme was made up about the plague, and then you said it too! Brilliant!

very nice.. beautiful descriptions.. I love hte phrase "voice shattering"

Beautifully written. Loved the imagery you have in this poem. Paints quite a picture.

Beautiful, really it is and I love it. :D It so tragic but holds so much emotion in it. Well done!

!* Noelle *!