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Burning Moon 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
i like :)especially "through dark and chrome // and the ride back home" (i know, rhyming doesn't make a poem, but it certainly helps) and "cover myself in blankets of colored paper" (even though i have no idea what you're refering to :)) good job
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
first of all, I loved the chemistry allusions. so beautiful. "singing like a polished angel"- that made me melt.
Faithless Juliet 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful detail and imagry, the abstract vein flowed through this with a wonderous power that drew me in. Amazing display of emotions. Keep up the good work.

much love,Juliet.
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