Lovely fic. Many congrats!

LURRVE DA FIC

LOVE IT !

Oh I like it!

lol... so kate was the one to beat nathaniel up. well that's perfectly alright. hahaa.. the action scene was pretty fun to read. and this chapter is great too. i'll be waiting for your sequel. D i'm sure it will be just as wonderful of a story.

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really great story and look forward to the sequel but i think i know who she might fall for..but anyways, i wish ya the best of luck for publishing just make sure when you do publish put a little note out here to let me know! good luck and keep up the good work!_

ok, so maybe reviewing after the story is all posted isn't the smartest thing in the world to do, but i'm doing it anyway. yeah. cause i really liked your story, i think it's one of my favorites on fictionpress. encore! i'll be looking for more of your writing here.

Perfect ending. Might want to rewrite some parts in the right mode before you try submitting it for publication!

Aw! they finally confess! Yay! i love happy endings! fabulous ending to a fantastic story! this has got to be one of my favourite stories totalli loved reading it dont give up writing! laterz!

Aw... *wipes away itsy bitsy tear* I love happy endings... I love your story too!

Great story, it was fun to read all the fights between Kate and Thomas. Although Kate did act like an idiot much of the time. )

Anne is one lucky girl! She gets the Adonis! I remember reading your description of Fiona's brother and going, "yum." Maybe because you were to busy talking about how great he looks, I kind of got the impression that he is the brightest bulb in the bunch.

I really liked the ending. I was so not surprised that Thomas was just going to let Kate walk away without ever telling her how he feels. How can men be so stupid sometimes? Well, I’m glad that justice was done, and Cobbs was arrested too. And I think that their squabbling is so cute! Very sweet ending :D

signed copies? woot! great end to a delicious story! i mightily hope it'll get published. It deserves it. i was near hysterical, bouncing on my chair through the whole chapter. hope to see a sequel... maybe about the trials of married life... or maybe their children? but sometimes sequels are not as good as the original stroy so yeah just a small warning. Do continue to write, ok? and yes i know my pen name is great...

I admit he was a sexy psyco! ;-) Bravo on the final chapter, that was a sweet way to end it. I looked back to see who you compared to a Greek Adonis and I must say I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel. Believe me I can understand how long it takes to write and edit the story. My story is taking me forever to write and I still need to go back and edit the earlier chapters. It was a really good story though and I'm glad I read it because it was really well written. Great Job! and personally I hope to read more of your stories soon. :-)LadyWriter

aw.. that was such a sweet ending!