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| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-24 ch 3,   | sweet she has a friend and you need to update this soon lol im dieing over here wanting to read more! btw if you have AIM my sn is DarkAngel183705 or YAHOO my sn is Sarahk_20_2005. ~SarahJane |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-24 ch 2, | aw Shane sounds like a sweet heart! I wish more guys could be like that! cant wait to read more! ~SarahJane |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-02-24 ch 1, | omg this is gonna be a good one i can tell! i cant wait to read more! keep up the good work! ~SarahJane |
| xInSaNexBlOodyxPrInCeSs 2005-06-16 ch 3, | *grumbles* I guess he's not much of a stalker anymore. But why would a ** wear Lion King pjs? Wouldn't she more likely wear a nightgown or something? |
| kikil 2005-06-15 ch 3, | that's cute, the running around part. it's nice that she has a friend. the italized part seem like her memeries with amanda, did they used to be friends or something? |
| kikil 2005-06-15 ch 2, | since when was she unhappy? and will you explain what's up with her parents? |
| wannabe 2005-06-12 ch 3, | You rushed it. |
| Carbon Slash 2005-06-11 ch 3, | Nice chapter ^^ Shane is great :) |
| Luv and Peace 2005-06-05 ch 2, | Cute, and despite everything, she's still innocent. Anyway, update soon! |
| tickle-me-pretty15 2005-05-30 ch 2, | This is good so far, can't wait to the next chapter. ~tickles!~ |
| Deciever 2005-05-26 ch 2, | Good, just one thing I would point out. Generally, one says "to look beyond my clothes", not "beneath". |
| avaeya 2005-05-12 ch 2, | okay, this one made me feel a little bit better. |
| xinsanexbloodyxprincess 2005-05-11 ch 2, | Aw...loking forward to another chappie! Keep writin'! The guitar guy sounds like a stalker for some reason.. |
| goblinishelves 2005-05-11 ch 2, | how sweet! I wonder what will happen next...tum di dum di dum! Shane does seem realli hot and kool...meh...hot and cool r opposites...not in the way i mean it tho obviously ;) |
| Carbon Slash 2005-05-10 ch 2, | Wow Amanda's her ex-best friend? Shane sounds great and Alex's a jerk. I feel sorry for Lori. Anyway, great chapter~ |