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Broken Telephone 2006-03-08 . chapter 6
Oh! I can't believe how awesome this story is! You have to update SOON o ri might just DIE!!

Great job! This is totally freaking awesome!
Broken Telephone 2006-03-08 . chapter 5
Aww how romantic! I'm like in LOVE with this story!
Broken Telephone 2006-03-08 . chapter 4
Oh!! *Shivers in excitement* YAY!
Broken Telephone 2006-03-03 . chapter 3
Dude I'm stoked to see what happens!! This D...I am sensing good things from this!
Broken Telephone 2006-03-03 . chapter 2
YAY! I'm totally digging this story! I love it! I can't wait to read more!
Broken Telephone 2006-03-02 . chapter 1
This is really cute! I'm totally hooked!!
Kratrz 2006-02-27 . chapter 6
UPDATE! AH! want more :)
JT FAN 2005-07-08 . chapter 6
please update.i think this is a great story.
JT FAN 2005-06-06 . chapter 6
i love this story!julianne needs to lighten up.when will sydney and diego hook up?i think he would be so good for her.please update soon.cant wait to read the next chappie.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-05 . chapter 6
Sweet chapter. Cute stuff. Your writing has matured so nicely, and your style is so honest and endearing.

I have noticed that in A New Beginning and this story, the main character is a girl who has emerged from an abusive, domineering relationship. I hope you don't mind my asking, but is this related a bit to your life? You don't need to say of course, but it was just one of my thoughts.
itsfantastic 2005-06-04 . chapter 6
Aww...I really like! Diego is a really cute character. Good job! Update soon!
birdytamel 2005-06-04 . chapter 6
great chapopie! loved it, and their first real conversation lol. one thing, in the letter to her friend jesa, she wrote, "(and still don’t know his real hame)." 1) i think u meant name and 2) if u did, then she'd just found out his real name was diego before she wrote the letter, i thought...
plastic figurine 2005-06-04 . chapter 6
Oh! I really like this. Please update soon, ha, I can't wait for more.
The Lark Ascending 2005-05-26 . chapter 5
Hi again,

This keeps getting cuter! And you pleased me immensely with the juicy details of D's appearance ;) Also, this

“You should get some, then. Sleep, I mean.”

was hilarious! It might have sounded trite, but for the perfect timing. Comic relief is a great device when used properly.

I do have a few gripes with your messy grammar, but I won't bother about that here. Not that you'll die of suspense, but feel free to email me if you're curious.

One last question: Since the story is called "Three Weeks with Diego," what is your point in leaving out his first name from the story so far? If we didn't already know his name from the title, it might have been a nice little twist to the plot, but right now it seems trivial, especilly b/c you keep bringing it up. But maybe you have a trick up your sleeve - I'll wait and see.

Good luck!
floozie in the jacuzzi 2005-05-25 . chapter 5
I like this story. You write like a real author and not like a lot of the writers here who make their story too perky.

Update soon. =)
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