That was aewsome. It was the very essence the fear of nightmares. I liked the flow of the poem. The way i read it remended me of my poem Into the Lupine Mind-- mysterious and haunting. I loved it.

*^_^* Happy Writing~Jazzie Kings

P.S.- your bio is outstanding. if i could i'd give it an award like they do books. I love everything you mentioned in there from Hogwarts to Alanna and George.

But if you stay awake, you start to see the world around you in different light and you find that nightmares aren't only in your sleep but are around you.

I really liked that. And your bio is AMAZING to say the least.

geez, freaky! thanks for reviewing my poem! I need some feedbakc its like the people here and braindead, or something. X_X this rocks my boxer shorts! Wait I dun were boxers...

Hey if your not too busy could you check out my story "An art secret" I would really love to get your expert opoion on it I mean your poems are great! If you turned them into a story that would be amamzing!

~Mage-Ash~

you're amazing. i am so sorry that i haven't been consistent with the reviews in quite some time but now i'm going to try to catch up. keep writing :D

Powerful and passionate, I loved the detail that you used, it really created an abstract style and flow to your subject matter.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.