Nice work! So, just who was this poem aimed at anyway? (sly grin)

Aww! I felt bad for the monster in this poem. Was I suppose to? I don't know, just the words you used made me feel sorry for him. Your descriptions were excellent! I really liked this and the rhyming worked really well.

And hey, I wrote this poem for mothers day and I REALLY need advice! And seeing how you are excellent with poetry, I thought you could give a sugestion on how to make it better. PLEASE? Thanks a bunches for everything. God Bless!