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| buccaneergirl12 2006-07-29 ch 1,   | your feelings really show through. i am a huge fan of your poems. Sometimes writing can do what no other thing can do, let it all out. I know that feeling of hatred and hurt. AWESOME! |
| defenestrator 2005-08-02 ch 1, | Hi. I read your review and decided to take a look at the things you've written, and as I was looking through, the summary of this poem just kinda stuck out a little. Everyone has those bad days, and you put it very...angsty? I have periods of time when I feel that way, and I really liked how you put it. The last line, "I'll never be remembered" really hits the spot, seems to give the poem it's ultimate meaning, because, well, everyone wants to be remembered, right? Well, you're remembered to me, keep on writing, you're great. Much luv, penguinfury |
| NumblesTheAuthor 2005-05-27 ch 1, | i like this poem but i'm not a big fan of the all caps...maybe if there were lower case it'd be better, anyway it is still a really good poem... : ) |
| under estimated artistsoul 2005-05-13 ch 1, | How full of emotions you must hold inside. I liked a whole bunch of lines, I can't pick just one, so I'll put this one in my Fav. Stories. K?It's ironic how the pain filled poems are the ones that really come from the heart!Later,Thrish |
| RonCor 2005-05-08 ch 1, | no, im gunna cry, i need you, no, anyways (am i weird?) lol, yes, ok, very very well done, i like the bolded words, makes them, stand out and sting you, so you really get the message, great job young one who writes better then all, ok im sorry, im reaLLY NOT THAT WIERD, KINDA THAKS FOR THE REVIEWS, and im fine, no anger in this boy ;) love lots RonCor |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-08 ch 1, | This anger radiates from the screen, I think my skin is burned, need some lotion... |
| nigeline 2005-05-05 ch 1, | Review tag! i love the use of capital letters. Great, and very familiar. |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-04 ch 1, | weve all had those days... nice format with all the capitalness... awesome poem |
| poetic abortion 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Crazt little poem, horrific as intended. O__o *hides* Not bad, not bad. Keep up the fantastic work! !~* Noelle *~! |
| crazy dog events 2005-05-02 ch 1, | your capitalizationmade me think you were CRAZY , but that endears me to you-or at least the poem. "lacerate my honest attempts"... cool. |
| midsea 2005-05-02 ch 1, | "That MASK DOESN’T HIDE THE MONSTER" I am LOVING that line. :3 Word of advice: Crimson is possibly one of the most overused descriptive words in writing+poetry. I'm not saying re-write this or anything, because poetry is feeling, but sometimes it's best to find an alternative. I love this. Hardcore hatred, I know how you feel. |