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| MelGrl 2007-07-31 ch 1,   | GREAT beginning. Luved the way you ended the first chapter. Can't wait for the rest since the story sounds very amusing. Please update soon, 'cause I want to read more. |
| Somedaymydreamswillcome 2006-03-16 ch 1, | Oh. My. Geeze. I haven't NEVER had that happen to me ::knock on wood::...But I SURE hope it doesn't happen in a house full of guys! lol...I mean I hope there's at least ONE girl there...lol LOVE IT! But how are they all going to fit in the one car? How many people are going?Melodyxoxoxoxoxo |
| ur just you 2006-02-26 ch 1, | haha, stain on her pajamas? i can laugh! im a girl! lol, anyways please please update! cause i love al of your stories! :) though i may have reviewed with the name Atreyu Love, its still me, its just me lazy to sign in! but i signed in! *clicks add author to favs list!* :) kk, so update k? |
| Mi.Ishi 2005-05-19 ch 1, | Bwahahahahaha! Oh, poor girl. I really like this and am quite excited to see what happens with it. Cheers,-solin |
| black robin 2005-05-06 ch 1, | I just knew she was going to get a stain on her pants! I just knew it! I hate those days when period is no longer just another word at the end of the sentence. I'm serious. It's a pain in the **. Well not the ** but..it's a pain. Update soon! I think this is the beginning of an awesome story. |
| chainedreamer 2005-05-06 ch 1, | OH MY GOD!! That was just hilarious!! you had me laughing out loud in my uni lab TWICE!! but please please do update soon! |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-05-04 ch 1, | oh, gosh... the embarassment...its awful...so evil, how can you DO that to your character? lol. well, its a cute plot, and ought to be hilarious with these characters. please continue! |
| Krystal Nickle 2005-05-03 ch 1, | please continue with this story. it is already very intersting and it is only the first chapter. one girl with three guys! should make a very good adventure! so on with chapter 2 please. thanks |
| Sumire Cherise 2005-05-03 ch 1, | hey hun! I like it so far! No better way to start than with a long chappie! I'm gonna put you on all my lists, k? so I can keep up with the story!! Ciao, bella! ;} |
| Helyn 2005-05-03 ch 1, | OMG! That's funny! CONTINUE! |
| twistedFAerieTALes 2005-05-03 ch 1, | lmao. great start. cant wait to see what you do w/ur story. update soon! ~Sage |
| Stupid Yellow Popsicle Stic... 2005-05-03 ch 1, | "I should have seen it coming, but I never thought Peter had that much evil inside of him. Gee, was I ever wrong about that runt!" HAHAH that's what I think about my little devil child of a brother. ^__^; "Well... I was going to tell you that my emergency was... I ran out of peanut butter." AHAHAHA! Tristan is SO funny. omg. I feel bad for Sophia being stuck with him. lol. i can't wait until you tell us more about these three guys, what they look like and all, and more about this Zayden guy (cool name btw)!! Continue!! |
| B.R.35 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Like the idea. Sounds like they are going to go crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going! |
| fantasy-heart 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Oh it's so good! I really hope you'll update soon. I really like it! I had fun reading that. LOL. Anyway, please update. =D |
| tawnyfawn 2005-05-03 ch 1, | This was seriously brilliant! Hilarious the whole way throigh, with combinations of all sorts of hunmour! Okay, mainly dark humour, but still. Bloody brilliant! You should definitly continue! As if you can't after writing a beginning that good! =P Well, this is going on my author alert list! So I'll know as soo as you update! =D Which you will! 8threatening* No pressure. =P But, yeah. Great story. |