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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-05 ch 1,   | Oh very angry, i like the second half most, the rhythm is just amazing here x weasel within x |
| DragonofDarkness18 2005-05-04 ch 1, | Wow! My favorite part is the very end! "I'm sick of you being demanding, everything about you, just because of one rough landing." I'm not sure why but that really stuck out!! Great job! |