Reviews for The First Cut - FictionPress.com

ShadowPharoh 2005-05-17 ch 1,	wow. absolutly perfect! SP
kAIT REDFERN 2005-05-11 ch 1,	You write really dramatic work. Maybe you should do a book of poems and put them together in one story or something on here? You have a really mature writing style.Luv Kaitx
jainen-black 2005-05-10 ch 1,	interest but i liked it keep writing :)
Carmen de la Cruz 2005-05-03 ch 1,	Very powerful in its simplicity. This poem says worlds of the dark thoughts and life of someone with a very troubled spirit. The awesome thing about this is that it does all this in just over 100 words. It is not clear, however, if the character is a cutter who does this often, or if the thoughts and desire for the blade are only now being carried out. It might be there, just very subtle (or I'm missing it). It is easy and frightening to imagine that this is a poetry-piece of true, non-fiction thoughts and experiences. I only hope for the author's sake that it is purely fiction.
ThisCut_UpAngel 2005-05-03 ch 1,	I like this a lot and I hope to see more of your work. . excellent emotion!