Another chapter please! :D

I really like where this is going. Hehe, Jayden is such a shmuck and Adam doesn't seem too nice of a person. But I do like how you're developing your characters. Great work!

wonderful introductory chapter

lol adam is awesome! lol..great stuff!

hey, what happened? you stopped updating! iv only just started reading this but its really good! if your still writing on fictionpress then please keep with this one. hopefully you'll update soon!

I really like this story. _ Its pretty cool. Please update!

DUDE! This story rocks. UPDATE! Please?

whats wrong with you! i read this story 50 years ago and u STILL havent updated? like i said... WHATS WRONG WITH YOU! UPDATE or i'll pull a clark kent and eat you (inside joke about smallville... tom welling (clark kent looked so big in one episode it looked like he would eat this one girl... funny stuff, i tell you)! o btw i love your other story... the parker chronicles... good stuff, my friend. good stuff. Again... update!

i really like your style and I really like this story. It's awesome: haha Adam Lazzara and John Nolan and Michelle Nolan- darn their story is becomming to popular. Well I heart Straylight Run and Taking Back Sunday all the same. Hmm... I don't know what to say I'm really liking this please continue soon :D-

lol.. wow.. confussing but good... what kinda music does adam play? lol... write more soon please... thanks

Wonderful job! Can't wait for next chapter. )

Very nice start on this story! I see some very minor grammar errors but other then that great job! I enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more.

You know, how did I miss this update? Oh yeah, I've been off fictionpress for a while. I hate homework, you know? It takes away my free time. It steals it, it wastes it, it destroys it. That's the poetic way to describe homework, lol. _

Oh, I love this story! It's ok though, I tend to have a lack of updates as well (even for the story I work on most). Well, that's all for now. Toodaloo!

Vandagirl _

Ah! I miss this story really badly. I know you are working on the other one, but couldn't you manage one little update sometime? *blinks extremely wide eyes* Please!

Karen

oh i like this story too! the chapter did kind of end randomly but i do like all the characters and can't wait to see what cody is like!

EEP. I missed your update.

You write so much better than me ( I'm jealous.