That was really heart-wrenching. Even though you wrote this in '05, I noticed your a/n at the end talking about continuing the story. All I have to say is that Stephenie Meyer had a dream and it became Twilight, so :-P I would enjoy it if you did continue--I want to find out what happens between these characters, and I want to meet Sully.

That was so sad! For a natural sap like me it was wonderful! Poor Gwen, but I like the way she wasn't willing to forsake her fiance, Sully, I always tend to feel sorry for the guy who loses the girl. I also really like the dialogue in this, the way the two finished each other's sentences was wonderful. Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Excellent first chapter! I do hope you continue, cos this is off to a great start! I love the conflict between the characters, and the supernatural connection that Gwen and Jason share. Tis very interesting, and I can't wait to see how Sully is going to factor into the equation. Please update!!