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| Shiko87 2005-05-24 ch 1,   | That was so sad! For a natural sap like me it was wonderful! Poor Gwen, but I like the way she wasn't willing to forsake her fiance, Sully, I always tend to feel sorry for the guy who loses the girl. I also really like the dialogue in this, the way the two finished each other's sentences was wonderful. Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed it! |
| Gemema 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Excellent first chapter! I do hope you continue, cos this is off to a great start! I love the conflict between the characters, and the supernatural connection that Gwen and Jason share. Tis very interesting, and I can't wait to see how Sully is going to factor into the equation. Please update!! |