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| TwystedFate 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Other than the fact I read "a bodiless voice" as "a boobless voice", I really like it, haha. Good work. :) |
| RedXfire 2005-05-03 ch 1, | very cool the start was wsome made me keep reading awsome keep it up |