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| Creedy 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethis poem really gets you thinking about where mankind came from... and the shallow moon has witnessed it all... is that what you wanted the readers to think about? |
| BahamutsTear 2007-08-31 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this piece. I have read all of your work. You're a very interesting writer. Waxing and waning ^_^ this one is my favorite. |
| youzi 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThere is a child-like wuality to this piece...has a lullaby-like effect..just makes me smile. Keep writing ! |
| boy that you loved 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abusethat's got an epic feel to it, nice imagery. good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh' |
| East-0f-Eden 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abusewow! That really is the moon which I love so much! |