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Twigstudios1972 2005-05-06 . chapter 1
I like this. The line "His lips move but my ears don't care" is tight. Can I use it when my boss says something to me? Great poem.
BestSkeptic 2005-05-03 . chapter 1
Heartwarming and cynical at the same time. I love it. Now let me go read some more of your work.
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