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| Kasey Renae 2006-04-04 ch 8,  | abuseI'm SORRY but I just...UGH I don't know why but I freakin' hate Shannon! I love this story but Shannon...USAGLSKFJLKJG I hate her! UPDATE! |
| WhoNeedsAPenName 2006-03-24 ch 8, | abusereally great story so far. Poor Adrienne...(sniffle) i hope they catch that killer, update soon! |
| ale 2006-03-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseGo Adrienne!I like yer story. Update! |
| Angel-Lija 2005-06-06 ch 5, | abuseSad. I know you hate one word comments, I hate them too, lol. But that's all I could think off: Sad. |
| Angel-Lija 2005-05-28 ch 4, | abuseThat is so sad. And the plot thickens. Can't wait for an update. |
| Paige 2005-05-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwesome chapter! I loved the flashback where they told each other that they loved one another. And I also liked how Shannon and Adrienne got to know each other. |
| Islandgyal2004 2005-05-09 ch 3, | abuseCool story, keep it up |
| Angel-Lija 2005-05-09 ch 3, | abuseThat was good. I knew that the killer was targeting lesbians, it seemed obvious, but I can't wait to find out more about the killer drama and so on. Now I saw that some people are already giving you bies feedback. Forget about them and continue writing. |
| pathmarkexpress 2005-05-09 ch 3, | abuseHalloa! This is a nice new twisty story. It's from a new angle, but i think it's really good. Oh yeah, the part where you say “How would you know?!” Adrienne yelled loud enough so no one would hear it....That doesnt make much sense to me...OOH! U R hinting that somethihng happened to Shannon and the killer too right? I wanna take a stab at it: did she survive one of the killer's raids? I have to read the rest of the story, so PLEASE update soon. I think this is my favorite story of yours. Julia X |
| darqlyte 2005-05-09 ch 3, | abusePlease take no offence, but your story seems to glorify homosexuals/homosexuality. I understand that this is your story and you have the right to write what ever you want, and I do respect your oppinion. I'm Christian, so I'm obviously biased. I just want to make one thing clear, homosexuality is a choice, you aren't born that way, you choose to be that way. There is no scientific evidence to support the idea that it's 'natural.' Again, I respect your oppinion. It's just that most people forget to mention it's a choice. And again, I'm Christian, so I'm biased. I appologize if this seems like a ramble. God Bless. -Darqlyte |
| Kezza 2005-05-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood Chapter! Update SOON! |
| SC 2005-05-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseOkey, I only saw the update today (my e-mail is whacked so I didn't get the author alurt) Anyways, I'm too lazy to log in right now but you know who I am, lol. Now for the story, that was sad. It's gonna take some time to get used to reading a story of this particular style but I'm open to it. I read some books and fics where there were gay characters but there was never a main character who's gay. I hope you keep up the good work on this story. |
| Kezza 2005-05-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood Chapter! Update SOON! |
| Paige 2005-05-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was so sad. I loved the flashback. It showed how close they really were. I hope that Shannon can help mend her broken heart. Great chapter. |
| Islandgyal2004 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon |