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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-01 ch 13,  | abuseUm, I'm really not into slash... but this was incredibly funny, and sweet, and just really great. A few typos, but who doesn't have them? I love the part at the end, about Greg. |
| PindrakeCake 2008-04-22 ch 13, | abusehaha, oh my god. i loved it. |
| Yourbutt 2008-04-05 ch 13, | abuseI love Greg! *dies happy* |
| Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-06 ch 13, | abuseSuch a witty story. Asolutely amazing. Enough said. |
| LadySara05 2007-12-20 ch 13, | abuseThat's a great story you've got there. You wrote it pretty well too, which I like. Good Work. Sara |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2007-12-16 ch 13, | abusebah, i love you/ your story madly! |
| Erisah Mae 2007-10-26 ch 13, | abuseHoly, talk about ya tangle of relationships... I thought that this was pretty well done, and that you made this incredible morass of sexual confusion feel authentic, in a comedy flick kinda way. I particularly enjoyed the dilemma by John and Aiden- the whole catatonic thing was highly amusing. Nice work. Erisah |
| Switch 2007-10-14 ch 13, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
| Marlod 2007-10-11 ch 13, | abuseEnd? There? ohh no! |
| caramel blazers 2007-08-11 ch 13, | abusehahahah... this is so funny.. is there a sequel? |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-08-03 ch 13, | abuseAt long last, am done with the story, and now... time for a review... Some parts of the story bored me, but other parts were really good... sometimes I just wanted to shut down my pc and never read the thing, and yet, at the same time I wanted to read it... because everyone deserves a happy ending !! Lol, I enjoyed it throughly tho', as I said, I lost my patience at times... yet, you produced the story matter really well and am in love with Aiden... then again, I always like the gay guy in the picture (...um... "story"!!)... well done, and... *sigh* that was like - "wow!" |
| fivestar ice 2007-07-19 ch 2, | abuselol oh god, i hope i start to like john more...his pro-bush is crazying me out |
| Kali 2007-07-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseInteresting so far, the only problem I have is in Chapter 3 because I am far too obsessed with video games: "Great, listen: Johnson just got a PSP in his room and Tom was going to bring in Halo or something. I was going to go over with Dave or someone and play – want to come?" Again, not integral to the story but the PSP is a portable, handheld, system and Halo is most definitely not licensed by Sony and is exclusive to the PC and Xbox. Meh. Look forward to future chapters. |
| Annwyl 2007-07-15 ch 13, | abusexD Mr. Turle. That made me laugh so much. I loved the story, it was cute. :] |
| 0ri 2007-06-28 ch 13, | abuseWow, this story is like, instant euphoria. I seriously loved it to bits and pieces. I loved John especially. He's so cute and proud and political, hehe. The ending was great. All the female characters in this story ticked me off so much... hahaha. Jessica needed to get hit by John's car, backed up and then run over again. Twice. Anyway lovely story, it truly made my day. |