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AngelicSunshineNOT
2007-03-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseHoly cow, that's good! XD I suck at writing poetry, so I appreciate anyone who can write a decent poem. This is awesomeness! Haha.
PuppyPadfoot
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abusePink is not my favorite color, but you've made me see the beauty in it. I love the poem. It was well written and flowed beautifuly. I too think you should enter it in a poetry contest.

~Puppy~
sondra
2005-05-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG SO TOUCHING! UR A TRU POET!
Pink
2005-05-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseI thought that it was a great poem. You make more of them. You should submit it to a poem contest.
Pouty Queen
2005-05-03
ch 1,
abuseTHAT IS SO COOL! i mean its awesomeness!! keep writing
Purple Honeydew
2005-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is adorable...the lines are very simple, but it creates vivid imagery. However, I found the ending a bit weak.

Overall a good job!

(I am putting up my poems that I wrote inspired by a project for English class myself. We had to search through a dictionary, find interesting words, and write a poem using one of the words. I opted to keep adding them as chapters, I thought it would be more organised. Just putting in my own two cents :P)
write25
2005-05-03
ch 1,
abusenice poem..i read it out loud to myself and it went really well, just flowing and beautiful. The only thing i would change is in the end, the last four lines dont fit the rhyming meter 'twilight' and 'day' otherwise, fantastic work! i'll eagerly read more poems by you. ~Mariah
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