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| AngelicSunshineNOT 2007-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly cow, that's good! XD I suck at writing poetry, so I appreciate anyone who can write a decent poem. This is awesomeness! Haha. |
| PuppyPadfoot 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abusePink is not my favorite color, but you've made me see the beauty in it. I love the poem. It was well written and flowed beautifuly. I too think you should enter it in a poetry contest. ~Puppy~ |
| sondra 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG SO TOUCHING! UR A TRU POET! |
| Pink 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that it was a great poem. You make more of them. You should submit it to a poem contest. |
| Pouty Queen 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseTHAT IS SO COOL! i mean its awesomeness!! keep writing |
| Purple Honeydew 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable...the lines are very simple, but it creates vivid imagery. However, I found the ending a bit weak. Overall a good job! (I am putting up my poems that I wrote inspired by a project for English class myself. We had to search through a dictionary, find interesting words, and write a poem using one of the words. I opted to keep adding them as chapters, I thought it would be more organised. Just putting in my own two cents :P) |
| write25 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abusenice poem..i read it out loud to myself and it went really well, just flowing and beautiful. The only thing i would change is in the end, the last four lines dont fit the rhyming meter 'twilight' and 'day' otherwise, fantastic work! i'll eagerly read more poems by you. ~Mariah |