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Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-24 ch 1,	i love the last 3 lines, most, they made me smile cause they're just so strong in comparison with all the whispy images before, great use of alliteration may i say, x weasel within x
roselilie 2005-05-03 ch 1,	Wow didn't expected it to end up like that. Great poem, definalty like how you made it sound sweet in the beginning then bitter in then end. Love the poem! Keep it up!
beti213 2005-05-03 ch 1,	good flow here and such... and I love "mindless menacing minions" and how the poem changes from being sweet to the story behind the story. My only suggestion: add "or" between heartfelt and harshly (7th to last line) it'll improve the flow, which is otherwise very smooth. beautifully done.