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| Lyra Alluse 2006-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseThis reminds me of a story I read in my english class. It was about a girl who was watching her body being burried in a morgue from a drinking and driving accident. The reoccuring line was "I am too young to die...how can this be happening?" I like the poem because it is very much like that story. Good message, a bit chilling. I liked the style you wrote it in too. Keep up the good work! You've got an awesome writing style. I can't wait to see more. |
| Child Of Fate 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow...that poem is really very touching.It also sends out one of the greatest messages. I'm very big on getting the message out on not drinking and driving. Anyhow, that was a great poem! |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abusewow wow wow, you sent shivers down my back, this poem is amazing, and so sad and so true but not cliched at all. this is just the best, i love everything about this, very well written with so much care, hats off to you x weasel within x |
| roselilie 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow i love it. It really got the maesage across. I also like the unique way you went about writing it. Great poem! Keep it up! |