This reminds me of a story I read in my english class. It was about a girl who was watching her body being burried in a morgue from a drinking and driving accident. The reoccuring line was "I am too young to die...how can this be happening?" I like the poem because it is very much like that story. Good message, a bit chilling. I liked the style you wrote it in too. Keep up the good work! You've got an awesome writing style. I can't wait to see more.

Wow...that poem is really very touching.It also sends out one of the greatest messages. I'm very big on getting the message out on not drinking and driving. Anyhow, that was a great poem!

wow wow wow, you sent shivers down my back, this poem is amazing, and so sad and so true but not cliched at all. this is just the best, i love everything about this, very well written with so much care, hats off to you x weasel within x

Wow i love it. It really got the maesage across. I also like the unique way you went about writing it. Great poem! Keep it up!